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Original: "During the summer vacation, my family and I visited an amusement park. It was a sunny day, and we were all excited about the rides and attractions. We started our day by going on the roller coaster, which was thrilling and fast-paced. Then, we tried the Ferris wheel, which gave us a beautiful view of the entire park. Next, we went on the water ride, which made us all wet but laughing. We also enjoyed some delicious snacks and treats throughout the day. Overall, it was a fun and memorable experience for all of us."

Rewritten: "My family and I visited an amusement park during the summer vacation. Excited about the rides and attractions, we spent the sunny day enjoying various activities. Starting our day with the thrilling and fast-paced roller coaster, we then moved on to the Ferris wheel, which offered a beautiful view of the entire park. The water ride made us all wet but was accompanied by much laughter. We indulged in delicious snacks and treats during our time at the park, making it a fun and memorable experience for everyone."

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